Thursday, 26 May 2011
What am I?
I am one of the pillars the earth needs to survive. I am invisible. I don’t pollute the atmosphere. There is one tonne of me on your shoulders. I am made up of two different molecules. I can cause disasters by moving. I can make electricity. Trees help clean me. I help people dry there clothes. I help animals smell there food by caring it from place to place. I help plants scatter their seeds.
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Hi Eseki,
I like your poem. I think you are air! You have taught me some things about air that I didn't know.
My only other comment is to remember that 'there' is when you are talking about 'it's over there'. When you are talking about something that belongs to a group of people or things, you use 'their', as in 'I help plants scatter their seeds'.
I like your blog so far, keep up the good work!
Renee :)
Well done Eseki on your excellent writing. You had some interesting facts about air.
I am enjoying following your new blog Eseki. Keep up the great work.
Mrs Burt
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